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EDIT 07/01/2013: To Improvement-Club: I'd like pretty much everything to be corrected if possible. Thank you.

Honestly, the only things I'm proud of with this one are the anatomy and the hair. I should have spent much more time on this instead of procrastinating, despite the fact that I started this drawing weeks ago...

Please critique! I really want to improve!


... and by that I don't mean start calling my art a piece of shit. Be respectful and actually try to HELP me, not troll me, please.
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:iconghostboy100battle:
I love this. Where should I begin? I love how you captured this young woman's figure, very feminine but still very natural. I love small, natural boobs, so it would make sense. You did well at the inward curve on her torso without making her look too unrealistic. Her hips are perfectly shaped, good for keeping that little treat between her legs well protected. Her pose is very believable, she looks so relaxed. But her right underarm seems to... portrude a little. Her eyes have an adorable twinkle to them, but look a little over mascara'ed.

This is at least a lot better than anything I could do. Please, make more!
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I really like this piece. upon scrolling through your gallery it caught my eye enough to click on it an see it in better detail.

this is with your young age in consideration...
way better at people than myself at 14, your color skills too.
i think with more work on the arms, head, neck, shoulder area it would look fantastic :)
the arms are a bit thin, the head doesn't sit right, like it fell off and was thrown back on, the foreshortening on the bent arm fell flat and i think the shoulder is a bit high on the straightened arm .. the feet not sure if they were covered by cloud to remove detail? still looks nice though
i think the hair would look nicer without the big bold outline and a bit more flow :)

the background goes nicely with with the pose
it creates a sense of 'heavenly', really refreshing

hope i have been helpful! keep up the good work!! :)
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I'm 23 and still can't freaking draw as good as this!:icondeskflipplz:

Er...
Is that me or her left hand seem to be mirrored?
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Nah, it's not mirrored.
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Her finger look a little like a thumb...
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:iconreevyreevy:
Really? I must fix that...
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:iconstreled:
Yes, look at both hands.
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*DestinyDecade Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's... very impressive. Wow.
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*DestinyDecade Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep. Well done here.
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*DestinyDecade Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome.
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